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Satpam: Episode 2 – The Door Should Have Stayed Closed

Satpam: Episode 2 – The Door Should Have Stayed Closed

The sound inside the building did not stop.

It dragged slowly across the floor, uneven, like something being pulled instead of walking. Arman stood frozen at the threshold, his flashlight fixed on the empty space ahead. The beam felt too small now, too weak to reach the corners where the darkness seemed to gather.

He told himself it was an animal.

A cat. A rat. Something that had found its way inside.

But the sound was wrong.

Too heavy.

Too deliberate.

It paused.

Then came again, closer than before.

Arman took a step back, his breath tightening in his chest. The air inside the building felt thick, harder to move through. There was a smell now, faint but noticeable. Damp and sour, like something left too long in a place with no light.

“Hello?” he said again, louder this time.

His voice did not carry far. It seemed to fall flat, swallowed by the concrete walls.

No answer.

The dragging stopped.

Silence returned.

For a moment, it felt like the building was listening.

Arman swallowed and forced himself to step inside.

The beam of his flashlight swept across the floor, then up along the walls. Bare concrete. Cracks running like veins through the surface. Dust settled in the corners, undisturbed.

Nothing moved.

Nothing breathed.

Nothing that should have made that sound.

He took another step.

The door behind him shifted slightly with a low creak.

Arman turned quickly, his light snapping back toward the entrance.

The door remained open.

But it looked different now.

The darkness outside pressed closer, as if the night itself had moved in.

He turned back toward the interior.

And that was when he noticed the floor.

Marks.

Faint at first.

Then clearer as he moved the light.

Long streaks across the dust.

Not footprints.

Not paw prints.

Something had been dragged.

The lines started near the back wall.

And ended right where he stood.

Arman’s throat tightened.

He had not seen them before.

They were fresh.

The dust around them still unsettled, as if whatever made them had only just stopped moving.

A cold sensation crept up his spine.

Slow.

Deliberate.

He took a step back.

The light flickered.

Just once.

Then steadied again.

The dragging sound returned.

Behind him.

Inside the room.

Arman turned sharply.

The beam caught the far corner for a split second.

And in that moment, he thought he saw something shift.

Not clearly.

Just a shape.

Low.

Unnatural.

Gone before he could focus on it.

His breath came faster now.

“This is nothing,” he muttered.

But the words held no weight.

He moved backward toward the door, careful not to lose sight of the interior.

The dragging sound followed.

Closer.

Always just beyond the reach of the light.

His hand found the edge of the door.

He stepped out quickly and pulled it shut.

The metal slammed into place with a sharp echo.

He locked it.

Once.

Then again, just to be sure.

The silence outside felt louder than anything inside.

Arman stood there, his hand still on the door, waiting.

Nothing.

No sound.

No movement.

As if whatever had been inside had never existed.

He turned and walked back toward the post, faster now, his steps uneven against the gravel.

The trees seemed closer.

Their shadows thicker.

The path longer.

When he reached the post, he stepped inside and shut the door behind him.

The fluorescent light flickered again.

Then went dim.

Not off.

Just weaker.

Like it was struggling.

Arman sat down heavily in the chair, placing the flashlight on the desk.

His hands were shaking.

He looked down at them, trying to steady his breathing.

“This is just the first night,” he said quietly.

“You need the money.”

The words sounded forced.

He reached for his phone.

Still no signal.

Of course.

He leaned back in the chair and stared at the ceiling.

The light buzzed faintly above him.

Then stopped.

Silence filled the room.

A different kind of silence.

One that felt closer.

More present.

Arman slowly lowered his gaze.

The door to the post stood directly in front of him.

Closed.

Locked.

He stared at it.

Waiting.

A soft sound came from outside.

Not from the building.

From the path.

A slow, uneven step.

Then another.

Not dragging.

Walking.

Arman did not move.

The steps stopped just outside the door.

Close enough that he could hear the faint shift of weight on the gravel.

He held his breath.

A shadow passed beneath the gap at the bottom of the door.

Too long.

Too thin.

It lingered there.

Still.

As if waiting.

Then, slowly, something touched the door from the outside.

Not a knock.

A press.

Gentle.

Testing.

Arman’s chest tightened.

His eyes locked on the handle.

And then it began to turn.


Zsolt Zsemba

Zsolt Zsemba has worn many different hats. He has been an entrepreneur, and businessman for over 30 years. Living abroad has given him many amazing experiences in life and also sparked his imagination for writing. After moving to Canada from Hungary at the age of 10 and working in a family business for a large part of his life. The switch from manufacturing to writing came surprisingly easily for him. His passion for writing began at age 12, mostly writing poetry and short stories. In 1999, the chance came to write scripts. Zsolt took some time off from his family business to write in Jakarta Indonesia for MD Entertainment. Having written dozens of soap operas and made for TV movies, in 2003 Zsolt returned to the family business once more. In 2018, he had the chance to head back to Asia once again. He took on the challenge to be the COO for MD Pictures and get back into the entertainment business. The entertainment business opened up the desire to write once more and the words began to flow onto the pages again. He decided to rewrite a book he began years ago. Organ House was reborn and is a fiction suspense novel while Scars is a young adult drama focused on life’s challenges. After the first two books, his desire to write not only became more challenging but enjoyable as well. After having several books completed he was convinced to publish them for your enjoyment. Zsolt does not tend to stay in one specific genre but tends to lean towards strong female leads and horror. Though he also has a few human interest books, he tends to write about whatever brews in his brain for a while.

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